Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason some job are better done by men and others by women. do you agree or disagree?
Male and
female
are different in Fix the agreement mistake
females
by
their personality and behaviour. I totally agree with Change preposition
apply
this
opinion that some job
are better for Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
women
and some for men
and in the following essay I will give the reason
clearly.
Firstly
, both gender are
different Change the verb form
is
by
physically, Change preposition
apply
mentally
. Correct word choice
and mentally
In other words
, science also
believe
that Change the verb form
believes
men
have more power to do hard and heavy work
because of the body
energy and Change noun form
body's
structural
. Replace the word
structure
For example
, more labour work
like agriculture and factories and machinery related word doing
by males rather Wrong verb form
done
then
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than
women
. Thus
, in the many factors recorded men
.
Second
main Add an article
The second
reason
is that, safety and kids
responsibility. Change noun form
kids'
kid's
To
instance, in many countries Change preposition
For
women
are not so safe to work
every place in
any time because of Change preposition
at
this
some work
type
are different two Fix the agreement mistake
types
of
them, Change preposition
apply
however
, the other reason
is women
have more responsibility
like kids and household related to they can do every word Fix the agreement mistake
responsibilities
any thing
and Correct your spelling
anything
men
can do. As a result
, in India
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,India
their
are few rape Replace the word
there
case
done in past years so parents do not allow their lady child to Fix the agreement mistake
cases
work
in
night shifts. Change preposition
apply
Hence
, less safety also
the main Add a missing verb
is also
reason
for difference
between the Add an article
the difference
work
type.
In
the opposite Change preposition
On
the
agree,in the present day Correct your spelling
they
women
also
so hard working and safe. To explain it, Add a missing verb
are also
women
also
working
related to 'IT' Medical related field as well as in factories for labour Wrong verb form
work
work
girls and boy are equal. To clear this
, in the
developed nation like Correct article usage
apply
usa
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USA
uk
Canada Correct your spelling
UK
Uk
women
working
freely anytime anywhere.
In conclusion, Wrong verb form
work
male
are Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
are different by Fix the agreement mistake
females
body
by strength Add an article
the body
a body
also
women
have more home Correct your spelling
work
word
to do Correct your spelling
work
many
other life Replace the quantifier
much
also
depent
it. But Correct your spelling
depends
also
women
and do anything which men
do. Correct pronoun usage
apply
It
I stand in my point that both have Correct your spelling
If
different
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a different
job
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jobs
by
their ability.Change preposition
of
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