Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason some job are better done by men and others by women. do you agree or disagree?

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their personality and behaviour. I totally agree with

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their ability.

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Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason some job are better done by men and others by women. do you agree or disagree?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

ou have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write an email to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email, give details of the purchase describe the problem explain why you need a replacement urgently

Many people today spend most of their free time at home watching TV series or movies instead of going out. Do You think this is right or wrong ?

Some people believe that construction of new public buildings such as museums, towns halls and sporting is more important than renovation of the existing ones, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

In some place, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think student should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think student should spend time on other important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.