You recently ate at a restaurant. When you got home, you realized you had left your jacket behind. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter, • explain how and when you lost your jacket • describe your jacket • say what you would like the manager to do to help you find it

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing about a

jacket

I left it at your restaurant

last

night and I would like to ask you to let me know if you find it. I left my

jacket

at the restaurant when I was there for dinner.I hung it on the back of my chair when I sat down and I forgot to take it home with me. Since

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the night was warm

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I didn't miss it. It

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large light spring

jacket

.The colour is beige and it

brown

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has brown

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trim on the collar. It is made of cotton. There are two side pockets and they are

probaby

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probably

empty. Please let me know if you find my

jacket

. If you do, you can call me at my work number:555-1212. I will come by the restaurant and pick up the

jacket

as soon as I hear from you. Yours faithfully, Harry Maguire

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Ensure that all parts of the prompt are fully addressed in the letter.

coherence and cohesion

Use appropriate transitions to improve the flow of ideas within and between paragraphs.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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1Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

151 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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