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You recently ate at a restaurant. When you got home, you realized you had left your jacket behind. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter, • explain how and when you lost your jacket • describe your jacket • say what you would like the manager to do to help you find it

#restaurant #home #jacket #manager
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing about a
jacket
 I left it at your restaurant
last
 night and I would like to ask you to let me know if you find it. I left my
jacket
 at the restaurant when I was there for dinner.I hung it on the back of my chair when I sat down and I forgot to take it home with me. Since
,
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 the night was warm
so
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I didn't miss it. It
a
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large light spring
jacket
 .The colour is beige and it
brown
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 trim on the collar. It is made of cotton. There are two side pockets and they are
probaby
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probably
 empty. Please let me know if you find my
jacket
. If you do, you can call me at my work number:555-1212. I will come by the restaurant and pick up the
jacket
 as soon as I hear from you. Yours faithfully, Harry Maguire
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task response
Ensure that all parts of the prompt are fully addressed in the letter.
coherence and cohesion
Use appropriate transitions to improve the flow of ideas within and between paragraphs.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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