Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others argue that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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became a trend. Technology development pace in these days,

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to teenagers access to many inputs

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as knowledge about

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different

skills. According to

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, many of them are willing to start learning something that can earn money from it. Some of them are trying to make their little online business. Another group of them participate in workshops or study online resources to achieve

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skill set.

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with their

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children

working. Because they feel good about hard and soft skills that their child

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part time

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work.

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children

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rights activists always emphasize

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the importance of

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free time. They believe that kids and teenagers should use their after-school time to play, learn and have fun and each activity that causes

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making

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money from them

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is a kind of child abuse.

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opinion is actively trying to protect

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and happiness of childhood According to my own opinion, moderation is

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standard to decide

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every issue. In relation to

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thinking, we should respect our

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adolescence and remember that

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ages are

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period of their life to learn, grow and be happy and free.

I'm not actually agree

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with having a job

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these ages, and

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my opinion, we can make our

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disciplined, responsible and more strong with some hobbies, games or learning

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that are not against

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their freedom and happiness; No need to encourage

children

to work.