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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

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Dear Sir, I am Ozan and I am one of your customers. Two days ago My wife and I came to your restaurant and we ordered seafood. When our orders has been given we realised that the plates and glasses are very dirty. At the same time foods are really cold. We have been coming to your restaurant since when established your restaurant. We were going to say your attendant but he was very busy that's why we could not tell you about our problem.
However
, we filled out your customer satisfaction form which we determined about our situation.
Although
 we are pleased with your service, we have
wanted
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towanted
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 inform you about
this
 problem. We believe that you will pay attention to our experience and the form which we filled out to inform you about our situation. We wish that
next
 time we do not experience
this
 problem. Thank you for your understanding and sensitivity. Please do not to hesitate ask questions.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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