Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara dessert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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like to explore
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kind
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of areas
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sahara
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dessert
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or
an
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antarctic, where
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is much
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. In
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we will discuss
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advantages and disadvantages for those who prefer to go
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places.
First
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people
tour different
country
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countries
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or
city
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which is a new experience.
This
experience
make
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them
to
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visit
more places
such
as
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sahara
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the sahara
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dessert
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or
antarctic
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the antarctic
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.
Beauty
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of other
country
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countries
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and
kindness
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the kindness
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of
people
attract
tourist
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tourists
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to
visit
these areas. Due to journey of travelling
abord
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their experience and way of thinking change other
people
behaviour.
people
get to know other persons
culture
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and
tradition
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because of going
other
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places.
Secondly
, if we look disadvantages of going
such
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kind
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of
countries
, we get to know that many
countries
are going to do
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situation
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for
tourist
to
visit
their place. They make
a
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strict rules and
law
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laws
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for visitors. They make
worse
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the worse
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situation
for
persons
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because many
countries
are not happy with
tourist
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tourists
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. they don't want let them to
visit
their own country.That human beings are
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rude. they always change the rules and regulations for the
people
who like to come
in
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their areas. In conclusion, There are advantages and
also
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tourists
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. we should always know both sides
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the point
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point
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of view. Some
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they
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welcome their
tourist
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countries
make
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situation
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situations
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for visitors so we should always look
first
which
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at which
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place and
people
are best for
visitiors
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visitors
.
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