Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara dessert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
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dessert
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countries
city
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cities
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visit
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Sahara
sahara
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the sahara
dessert
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desert
antarctic
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the antarctic
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countries
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the kindness
people
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tourists
visit
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visit
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people
who like to come in
their areas.
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also
disadvantages for tourist
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tourists
of
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tourist
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