As global trade increases, many goods including those we use on daily basis are produced in another country and have to be transported long distances . Do benefits of this trend outweigh disadvantages.
As industrialization has been enhanced, a large number of
companies
have produced basic goods and exported them to some counties that
they may manufacture them. It has been observed that Correct word choice
where
this
phenomenon not only have
conspicuous bad results, but Correct subject-verb agreement
has
also
it may elaborate the local industries or companies
.
Contributing reasons that convert this
issue into a no profit
factor are Add a hyphen
no-profit
Correct your spelling
overcharging
over charging
and poor infrastructure. To explain, in some cases that international Correct your spelling
overcharging
companies
seduce local people to avoid them establishing manufacturing lines and promise them full support for basic goods in their contacts. In this
scenario, for two or three years small businesses will not feel any pressure otherwise
by next
years, main Correct article usage
the next
companies
will have offered them the same products at higher prices. Additionally
, after some
while indigenous will be faced with vulnerable infrastructure. To illustrate, developing countries usually have Add a comma
,some
a
large import rates and statistics have shown that their economies are deteriorating annually.
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
On the other hand
, it seems that global industries can be a
practical and profitable for countries that have faced Correct article usage
apply
by
poverty and do not have any choice Change preposition
apply
to
buy basic commodities from global Correct word choice
but to
companies
. For example
, due to unfair distribution souses
governments did not predict repercussions and they must pay Add a comma
,souses
this
huge costs.
To conclude, along with growing global trade main Correct determiner usage
these
companies
send their basic commodities to
long distances. Change preposition
apply
This
issue erodes the local economies in developing counties. But in some cases can be a good way. Ultimately, the disadvantages do in fact outweigh the advantages.Submitted by marzieh.kava on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?
Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS
Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!