As global trade increases, many goods including those we use on daily basis are produced in another country and have to be transported long distances . Do benefits of this trend outweigh disadvantages.

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As industrialization has been enhanced, a large number of
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have produced basic goods and exported them to some counties
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they may manufacture them. It has been observed that
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conspicuous bad results, but
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it may elaborate the local industries or
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and poor infrastructure. To explain, in some cases that international
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seduce local people to avoid them establishing manufacturing lines and promise them full support for basic goods in their contacts. In
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scenario, for two or three years small businesses will not feel any pressure
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years, main
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will have offered them the same products at higher prices.
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while indigenous will be faced with vulnerable infrastructure. To illustrate, developing countries usually have
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large import rates and statistics have shown that their economies are deteriorating annually.
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, it seems that global industries can be
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practical and profitable for countries that have faced
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poverty and do not have any choice
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buy basic commodities from global
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, due to unfair distribution
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governments did not predict repercussions and they must pay
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huge costs. To conclude, along with growing global trade main
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send their basic commodities
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long distances.
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issue erodes the local economies in developing counties. But in some cases can be a good way. Ultimately, the disadvantages do in fact outweigh the advantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global trade
  • economic growth
  • specialization
  • efficient resource use
  • variety of products
  • consumers
  • accessibility
  • standard of living
  • economies of scale
  • carbon footprint
  • environmental damage
  • importation
  • quality standards
  • local industries
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