The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

It is believed that as more consumer goods are manufactured more damage
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has
been inflicted
to
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the
environment
. In my opinion, one of the reasons is the increasing demand for
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consumption
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to
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industrial waste amounts emit into the atmosphere. I believe there are lots of methods to cope with
this
issue.
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, the world's population is increasing day by day which is one of
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reason
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for pollution.
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the growth of
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, it is believed that nothing can save when a human change their mind about safe their life
environment
.
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, according to statistics on waste in rivers in Hanoi,
the
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industrial activities are the way to cause
the
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water pollution by littering and low awareness
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makes To Lih river one of the most polluted rivers in Hanoi. There is some solution
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goods
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consuming
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, the politicians impose punishment on
people
who harm
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the
environment
.
Secondly
, oil
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exploitation
is a way to
deleption
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deception
deletion
of natural resources.
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, some famous brands of drink started an activity
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the drink will be discounted if the
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bring their own
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cup
. It can be seen that there
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very
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for reducing the goods in plastic as
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awareness for the residents with these activities will
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a good habit for
people
to save the community
environment
.
To
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conclusion, the government and
people
need to join a hand in manufacturing process more environmentally friendly.
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that having awareness of protecting
environment
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the environment
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will bring
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healthier convenient and cleaner air for
people
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production
  • consumer goods
  • natural environment
  • damage
  • causes
  • overconsumption
  • demand
  • environmental regulations
  • enforcement
  • natural resources
  • industrial pollution
  • waste
  • inadequate
  • waste management practices
  • public awareness
  • education
  • sustainable alternatives
  • stricter environmental laws
  • recycling
  • responsible consumption
  • clean technologies
  • renewable energy
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