“ You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing

this

letter with regards to an advertisement

that is

posted in the local newspaper. I am Tyson David a foreign student, searching for a part-time job. As you are aware, being a foreign student, I am eligible to work 20 hours per week. I am seriously searching for a position which is based on computers,

however

, I can work as a bar / restaurant manager or work at grocery stores. I am a quick learner, in my previous experience, I worked as a database engineer in maintaining the shopkeeping unit.

In addition

to that, I worked at a computer hardware store.

Although

, my past experience is based on computers.Kindly consider my resume for other openings as well. I am attaching my resume here for reference. I am looking for a job within 20 miles radius of Sussex university so It would be flexible considering my travel. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Vivek Vijayakumar

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8 paragraphs

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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