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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether girls and boys should be educated separately or
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 taught together in one classroom. In
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 I am going to present both views and give my opinion. We live in
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 big part of our day time is spent in school where boys and girls work together it provides us with communication with each other.
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 development of certain abilities,
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 will enable you to acquire the competencies in cooperation and
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 it can be later used in personal life and family, for creating a stronger marriage.
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, based on past trends people tend to act the same even nowadays and some of them consider putting men and women together hinders learning. It is believed that it is disturbing for students and
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 solution would be separating them from each other will accelerate their learning
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 because they will be focused on studying only.
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harmony in the life of society in future, because of understanding each other’s peculiarities.
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  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
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