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Many people believe that women make better parents than men and this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as woman at parenting. Do you agree?

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society nowadays, people may consider
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better
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 than
male
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.
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, I do not agree with
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 opinion at all. Taking care of children is not an indigenous ability to anyone, it is all about learning. Since no one knows how to be a good parent until they
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, there is no evidence to figure out who is better
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 raising kids. The main reason why
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people
poeple
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people
 usually regard
women
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better
parent
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 is mainly due to their personality. In traditional Chinese society,
women
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 seen as a public always
require
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women
 to be
kindness
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 and
careful
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, so that
she
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 could meet the standard of
a good
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a good woman
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women
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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