You have recently attended a job interview but the company did not give you the feedback yet. Write a letter to the human resources manager asking him/her about the result of the interview. In your letter:- - Introduce yourself and the job you have applied for. - Describe how you did well in the interview - Reasons for asking a prompt interview result

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Dear Madam, My name is Shikha, and I gave an interview in your company

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week for the post of Project Manager.

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, I didn't hear back from your team in terms of any positive or negative feedback. My interview went well, and I got good comments from the technical team. So, I was expecting a reply from your company.

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, you

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checked my round 1 test where I scored 99

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and that task was very difficult. Actually, I am asking for your feedback, because I am getting an offer from one more company. But I prefer to join your firm. If you could please me as soon as possible that would be great. It is about my career, so please respond fast. I hope you take immediate action after discussing

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with your management team. Looking forward to your positive reply. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

Submitted by shikha_dhingra on Mon Oct 03 2022

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

147 words

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