You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it. You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am one of the selected candidates for an interview scheduled for the 8th of October, at 9 am, on your college premises. I had been waiting for

this

opportunity for the past few days,

however

, I already had another appointment with "Jai Krishan College" for the same time, which I might not be able to decline because that was scheduled earlier than

this

one. I am writing

this

letter to apologise for the inconvenience that you might have. Though, at the same time, I do not want to miss the opportunity that you have provided.

Thus

I wanted to request to reschedule

this

interview for another day or week,

otherwise

, the same day after lunch, if possible.

Furthermore

, I was curious to know about the structure of the whole process like the number of hours and rounds that will be held on that day.

Moreover

, please do let me know in advance if there are any written tests involved so that I could prepare for them in advance. Hope you will be able to accept my apology, considering my current scenario. Looking forward to hearing from your side. Feel free to reach out for any information required. Yours Sincerely, Shivam

Submitted by cshivam2675 on Tue Oct 04 2022

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