You travelled to another city on business last week, and there was a problem with your hotel room. Write to the hotel manager. In your letter… - Tell the manager about the problems you had - Explain to them how you feel about what happened - Let them know what actions you would like them to take.

Dear Sir, My name is Shikha, and I stayed in your hotel
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the
last
Friday. I am writing
this
letter to complain to you because of the inconvenience I had during my stay. I came to Mumbai due to my business meeting, and I booked a Super deluxe
room
in your hotel. Actually, I heard about your resort from one of my friends living in Mumbai. But unfortunately, when I reached there I got a normal
room
despite having a pre-booking. At that time, I did not ask anything as I have to get ready for my meeting but I felt so bad at that time.
Moreover
, in that
room
, I did not get any
room
service and that was not at all expected from your staff members. I can give a bad review on google and which leads to huge damage to your hotel's reputation but I am not doing that. I would like you to have a meeting with your staff members, and ask them to do their duty properly.
Also
, they need to be careful while making bookings online, there should be a proper record of every booking to avoid any future inconvenience. Looking forward to your positive reply. Yours Sincerely, Shikha
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