Money offered for post graduate research is limited; as a consequence, some people argue that financial support from the government should only be provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. Do you agree or disagree?
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money
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.
There are numerous researches
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researches
on global warming have been among the most popular Fix the agreement mistake
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projects
. By looking at the new researches
we can see that many of them are just using Fix the agreement mistake
research
an
specific way to address Change the article
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the
global warming using different statistics. While these are not the researches that must be funded because the issue of global warming already exists and government may provide Correct article usage
apply
money
and facility for those that are the probable solutions.
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it may increase the Correct your spelling
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student's enthuthiasm
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enthusiasm
researches
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current
main scientific issues are based on these Correct article usage
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The key point is that in an overall view the number of Fix the agreement mistake
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In conclusion, although
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the government should provide more money
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