You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regard to the part-time course I am currently taking.
First
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, I will like to appreciate everyone for the kindness and love shown to me.
However
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, as the manager of my department, I have been requested to embark on a 4-months training outside the state which is due to commence
next
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month.
This
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training is held by the head office of my company, and it is compulsory for all heads of department. It is a criterion for promotion
next
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year. At the moment, I do not think I can continue the program due to work demands, my time and attention are highly needed. It will be almost impossible to combine both work and study, especially as it is an out-of-town training. Most times, these training courses require no or minimal distractions,
that is
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full concentration.
However
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, I was thinking if it will be possible to defer the remaining course program to the
next
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session or summer school. While I tidy up the assignment and projects due for
this
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semester, by the end of
this
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month. Thank you for understanding, and will be expecting feedback. Yours sincerely, Chioma Obi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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