You and a couple of your colleagues would like to participate in a work-related seminar. Write a letter to your colleague who is the person in charge of the seminar and ask for: Detailed information regarding the dates Program schedule Enquire about cost and possible discounts for groups

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Dear John, My name is Shikha, and I am writing

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letter to inquire about the Project Management Seminar which is being organized by our company the

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month. I would like to know about its schedule if it is going to be for one day only or if it will run for multiple days. I would prefer that it should go for multiple days as

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is one of the important aspects of working on projects.

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, what would be the timing for

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program, I hope it will be during our working hours only because attending after office hours would not be possible for everyone.

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, many of my teammates want to enrol in

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programme, so I would to know what would be the discount in case of group enrollment. We would be a total of 15 members, and I hope you will provide us with a good discount. Looking forward to your positive reply. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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161 words

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