remiumSoft is primarily a leading database administration software provider company. It has been a progressive and fast-growing software business organization. Like any other mid-size or large organization, Premium Soft requires a strategic human resou

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PremiumSoft is primarily a leading database administration software provider company. It has been a progressive and fast-growing software business
organization
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. Like any other mid-size or large
organization
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, Premium Soft requires
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strategic human resource
management
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since the company scaled up.
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essay analyses the deep-rooted problems and provides applicable solutions as well as recommendations for Premiumsoft in the area of human resource
management
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. According to the
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problems, the systematization of recruitment and selection,
performance
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management
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, training and development is a toolkit for strategy and SHRM realization. An effective recruitment and selection policy not only
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the requirements of a job but
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ensures that an
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will continue to maintain its commitment to providing equal opportunity to employees. Adherence to
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a policy will let you hire the best possible candidates for your
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management
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system should be integrated and aligned with strategy, vision and company values, it needs open communication and transparency. It should be simple and easily accessible with
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of IT technology. The
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should implement a good Code of Conduct with the help of the HR department that will
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ensure fair and productive
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management
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that will lead to innovation, high ethics, employee empowerment and put main stakeholders
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changes in
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environment, especially competition, technology and globalization,the
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need to sustain adaptability and
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because of its constant transfer of new employees,
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in the work methods and so on.
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, HRM is essential for every
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in today’s world and the role of HR has become very significant lately. HRM is all about people and they make an
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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