In the past people used to live their entire life in one place. Nowadays they live in several different places during their life. What are the reasons for this change? Is it a positive or a negative trend?

Dr Martins 29 Cowslip Avenue Berkeley 10 April 2018 Re:
Mr
Robert Smithson, 22 years old Dear Dr Martins, I am writing regarding
Mr
Robert Smithson’s discharge tomorrow. He was treated for partial thickness burns on the neck and chest accompanied by respiratory distress and he requires continuity of care. On 06 April, he was presented in our facility
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TBSA burns. A series of laboratory tests were done and revealed normal.
In addition
, his arterial blood gas and cardiac monitoring showed a normal range.
Although
there was no evidence of wheezing, he was
then
monitored for signs of respiratory problems. He had a urinary catheter and was been monitored hourly.
Consequently
, he was observed for
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position.
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,
Mr
Smithson was stable and was commence on oral analgesics, gabapentin and tetanus prophylaxis. It
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beneficial for him if you could visit him for wound cleaning, topical dressings and daily auscultation.
Mr
Smithson was given a health teaching regarding sunscreen application, massaging and moisturizing the affected area.
Additionally
, he was instructed to do a breathing exercise and advised for light activities and
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avoid contact sports. It
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appreciated if he follows his dietary recommendations
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fluid intake and visits a Burns Unit Outpatient on 17 April. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Nurse
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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