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Dr Martins 29 Cowslip Avenue Berkeley 10 April 2018 Re:

Robert Smithson, 22 years old Dear Dr Martins, I am writing regarding

Robert Smithson’s discharge tomorrow. He was treated for partial thickness burns on the neck and chest accompanied by respiratory distress and he requires continuity of care. On 06 April, he was presented in our facility

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TBSA burns. A series of laboratory tests were done and revealed normal.

In addition

, his arterial blood gas and cardiac monitoring showed a normal range.

Although

there was no evidence of wheezing, he was

then

monitored for signs of respiratory problems. He had a urinary catheter and was been monitored hourly.

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, he was observed for

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position.

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Smithson was stable and was commence on oral analgesics, gabapentin and tetanus prophylaxis. It

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beneficial for him if you could visit him for wound cleaning, topical dressings and daily auscultation.

Smithson was given a health teaching regarding sunscreen application, massaging and moisturizing the affected area.

Additionally

, he was instructed to do a breathing exercise and advised for light activities and

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avoid contact sports. It

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appreciated if he follows his dietary recommendations

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fluid intake and visits a Burns Unit Outpatient on 17 April. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours sincerely, Nurse

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

231 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

job mobility
career opportunities
relocate
advancements in transportation
diverse experiences
lifestyle changes
education pursuits
academic pursuits
economic factors
cost of living
housing affordability
migration decisions
personal relationships
family responsibilities
retirement
quality of life
desirable locations
globalization
social networks
remote work

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