SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT TO SOLVE THE TRAFFIC CONGESTION IS TO INCREASE TAX BUT OTHER DISAGREE. DISCUSS BOTH AND GIVE OPINION

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issue in daily life. One nation's development depends on the

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collection by the

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of them. It has been suggested that

tax

can be increased by solving the congestion of traffic while others

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with

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opinion today.

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less traffic and they can save

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their productivity so that they can give much effort

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their work. When the production improves

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will rise

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people

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more interested to pay

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when they can see the development of

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benefits

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enjoy different facilities like easier transportation with

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affordable

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range they will trust their

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provoce

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does not think it can be avil much. If the

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increased. After that, if

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get their personal cars they may provide more taxes when they buy.

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to pay more taxes when they have to earn more. To maintain personal transportation

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more and pay more to

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have some logic to their statement.

Government

should promote more to make more

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consciousness

conciousness

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consciousness

among

people

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