You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and • Give your reason for writing • Tell about your education • Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.

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Hello Walker, I am Peter Addison, a student of MSc. Management and in my
second
year. I am writing to express my interest in the Quality Assurance Manager position which is available in your office. I studied Risk management for my
first
degree and currently studying for my master's in Management.
In addition
, I have done some short courses in Quality Assurance with the Oxford School of Business in London.
However
, I have years of job experience and rich experience in the available position. After my
first
degree, I got a job with Vanguard Life Insurance as a Quality Assurance manager and I worked with them for two years before starting my Master's education. During the period that I worked with Vanguard, I won the best worker award for two years.
Nevertheless
, I have enormous knowledge of the use of most ERP systems that most cooperation use.
In addition
, I am a dedicated and hardworking person and I believe when given the opportunity I will do my best to make a positive impact in that position. Thanks for your understanding and looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Peter
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