Mrs Barrett, an English speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs barrett. In your letter 1. Suggest how you could help in her home 2. say why you would like to do this work 3. explain when you will and will not be available

Dear Mrs Barrett, My name is Devi and I am reaching out to you to express interest in being your house help. I came across your advertisement in the classifieds and I believe I will be a good fit for your requirements. I am quite adept with household chores and can assist you with cleaning the carpets, mopping the floors, and doing the laundry. I have a deep interest in home organising and plan to offer professional decluttering services in the future. Working in your home will give me an opportunity to build the skills required to start my business and financially support my ongoing course at the University. Please be informed that I am available in the evenings of all weekdays and unavailable on weekends to attend classes for my Master's degree. I hope you are impressed with the details I shared, and I hope to hear a positive response from you. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Devi
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