Many people are choosing to move to cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Deciding where to live is one of

life

's

difficult

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choices.

While

there are both

of

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advantages and disadvantages to

move

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moving

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to

cities

. I believe that for economic and comfortable

facility

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facilities

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,

life

in the

cities

is more beneficial to move in.

This

is because facilities in the

cities

can offer more

opportunity

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opportunities

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as well as

more

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a more

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affordable cost of living. In

a

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recent

year

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years

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,

life

in

cities

have

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has had

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many

advantage

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advantages

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to live in.

Also

near

the

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landmark

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landmarks

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and much more comfortable to

live

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living

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and go

to

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apply

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anywhere whatever they want.

This

is

due to

educations

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education

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and economics, they can lead to

the

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better way.

For example

, some parents want their

childen

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children

to get good

socialable

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sociable

. Not only about their kids's education but

also

about easier

to

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approach to

career

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careers

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and

occasion

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occasions

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in daily

life

.

However

, staying in

cities

can

brings

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bring

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them

to

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disadvantages as well. People who moved to the

cities

are obtain

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have

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easier to

approach

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approaching

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with

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pollution

.

For instance

, air

pollution

from

car

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cars

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or

bus

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buses

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, sound

pollution

from people around their house, as we know that in the

cities

was

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is

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so messy, and many

side

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sides

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from

pollution

which make you feel annoyed.

Moreover

, traffic

jam

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jams

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in the

cities

is

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apply

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the huge damage that no one can

fixed them

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fix

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.

To sum

up

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the

statememt

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statement

,

although

in

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the

cities

have many

benefit

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benefits

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and

profit

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profits

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to our

life

, it might

brings

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bring

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the

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apply

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side

of

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apply

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disadvantages as well.

However

, nowhere in the world

have

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has

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just advantages, so always think

positive

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positively

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and look for the advantages for

better

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a better

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comfortable

life

.