First impressions are more important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing good job? To what extent do you agree?

Careers can be flourished if
someone
is getting a good
job
of influencing the
interviewer
in the
first
place. Most people believe that performing well in an
interview
is the turning point in
order
to
securing
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employment. In my
opinion
, facing an
interview
with great confidence and giving the best can lead to securing the
job
.
However
, there are other important aspects which really matter
such
as educational background,
work
experience
and
skills
etc. It is commonly believed that
,
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the
first
impression really matters when facing an
interview
, and
then
conversing with an
interviewer
decides why
someone
will get a
job
?
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An
interview
is a mode of evaluation of the
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candidate's
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candidates'
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candidate's
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credentials and how he or she reacts to the questions.
For
example
, in an
interview
most of the time,
candidates
might ask to solve any task related to their field, and if they fail to provide solutions or explanations they might
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reject.
That is
why
performance
in the
interview
really plays a vital role in getting the
job
.
However
,
this
is partially true; sometimes an
interviewer
may be interested in the
candidates
' potential and how they can be useful as an
employee
in
order
to join an organization.
Candidates
'
education
, soft
skills
, certification and
work
experience
are
also
considered
instead
of
performance
in an
interview
.
For
example
, Japanese organizations hire an
employee
on the basis of their potential, educational credentials,
work
history and
skills
rather than just an
interview
performance
.
Otherwise
, it will be a can of worms for the employer when getting
work
from a new
employee
. To conclude, in my
opinion
,
first
impressions and giving your best in the interviews are so important but, at the end of the day,
education
,
work
history and
skills
really
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are really
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considered as key facts during the recruitment process. Careers can be flourished if
someone
is getting a good
job
of influencing the
interviewer
in the
first
place. Most people believe that performing well in interviews is the turning point in
order
to
securing
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secure
show examples
employment. In my
opinion
, facing an
interview
with great confidence and giving
best
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the best
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can lead to
secure
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securing
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the
job
.
However
, there are other important aspects which really matter
such
as
an
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apply
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educational background,
work
experience
and
skills
etc. It is commonly believed that
,
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apply
show examples
the
first
impression really matters
while
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when
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facing an
interview
,
then
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and then
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conversing with an
interviewer
decides why
someone
will get
job
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?
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.
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An
interview
is
mode
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of
an
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evaluation of the candidate’s credentials and how he or she reacts to the questions.
For
example
, in an
interview
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most of the time
candidates
might ask to solve any task related to their field, and if they failed to provide solutions or explanations they might them reject. That’s why
performance
in the
interview
really plays a vital role in getting the
job
.
However
,
this
is partially true; sometimes an
interviewer
may
interested
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be interested
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in the
candidates
' potential and how they can be useful as an
employee
in
order
to join an organization. Candidate’s
education
, soft
skills
, certification and
work
experience
are
also
considered
instead
of
performance
in the
interview
.
For
example
, Japanese all organize based employees based on their potential, educational care, denials,
work
history and
skills
rather than just an
interview
performance
.
Otherwise
, it will be a can of when for the employer while getting
work
from a new
employee
. To conclude, in my
opinion
,
first
impressions and giving your beare in the
interviares
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interviews
is so important but, at the end of the day,
education
, worry, and
skills
are considered key facts during the recruitment process.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • First impressions
  • Interviews
  • Securing
  • Communication
  • Preparation
  • Research
  • Performance
  • Qualifications
  • Confidence
  • Body language
  • Networking
  • Recommendations
  • Follow-up
  • Technology
  • Social media
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