Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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the
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and countries are searching for them in
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areas which are not
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yet. I completely disagree with
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view. On one
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non renewable
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of science and technology, transportation,
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they are the main cause of global warming in today's world.
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of searching for them in unknown lands, we should focus our work
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finding the alternative
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these
resources
.
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, electricity the
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life line
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of today's world was primarily obtained by burning oil and gases, which released
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green house
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gases in large
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thus
harming the environment in the process.
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, after the introduction of solar
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and wind turbines, not only the
emmission
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emission
of these gases are controlled, but the amount required to use the luxury of electricity is
also
reduced.
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focusing time and energy on finding alternatively, is the best choice. Despite of
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of these
resources
, they are still very important for the smooth
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of the system.
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usage cannot be revoked immediately.
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renewable
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petrol,
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diesel
,etc. All points considered, we should continue our search for
resources
like oil and gas, while trying to find the alternative for the same.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • executive compensation
  • income disparity
  • corporate governance
  • incentive structures
  • ethical considerations
  • competitive advantage
  • demotivation
  • pay structures
  • social inequality
  • talent acquisition
  • company culture
  • economic impact
  • leadership roles
  • employee morale
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