You and some friends ate a meal at restaurant to celebrate a special occasion , and you very pleased with the food and services . Write a letter to the restaurant manager .

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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letter to show my deep gratitude to your restaurant. It was
saturday
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Saturday
a Saturday

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we organised a birthday party for our friend. We were about 10 people and the party started
about
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at about

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6pm. It was her 28th birthday. And the occasion
were
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was

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very
surprised
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surprising

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. We want to make
this
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occasion a
memeroble
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memorable

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one because she is my childhood friend. As we came to the restaurant we were worried because the seat did not
reserved
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reserve

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. So we talk to the receptionist and she was very helpful and follow us to the dining area ,
done
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doing

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everything for us.
Then
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the celebration started everyone was joyful.
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

First
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,First

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we ordered the
food
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then
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the cake cutting started. After
sometime
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some time

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the ordered
food
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came and we all started to
having
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have

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it. Surprisingly, the
food
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was delicious and superb. The aroma of
food
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awake
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awakens

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us strongly and
delighted
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usdelighted

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. All the
food
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were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was

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excellent especially
Indo-Arabic
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the Indo-Arabic

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desserts are awesome and dynamic. And the service given by staffs are very nice and compassionate, They were energetic, enthusiastic and more friendly. Kindly, I am thanking you and your
staffs
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staff

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for providing us
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excellent
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with execellent
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with execellent

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with execellent

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execellent
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excellent

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services.
Thanking
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Thank

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you, Yours Sincerely, name

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