You and some friends ate a meal at restaurant to celebrate a special occasion , and you very pleased with the food and services . Write a letter to the restaurant manager .

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to show my deep gratitude to your restaurant. It was

saturday

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Saturday

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we organised a birthday party for our friend. We were about 10 people and the party started

about

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at about

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6pm. It was her 28th birthday. And the occasion

were

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very

surprised

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surprising

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. We want to make

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occasion a

memeroble

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memorable

one because she is my childhood friend. As we came to the restaurant we were worried because the seat did not

reserved

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reserve

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. So we talk to the receptionist and she was very helpful and follow us to the dining area ,

done

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everything for us.

Then

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the celebration started everyone was joyful.

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First

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we ordered the

food

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then

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the cake cutting started. After

sometime

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the ordered

food

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came and we all started to

having

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it. Surprisingly, the

food

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was delicious and superb. The aroma of

food

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awake

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us strongly and

delighted

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usdelighted

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. All the

food

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were

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was

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excellent especially

Indo-Arabic

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the Indo-Arabic

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desserts are awesome and dynamic. And the service given by staffs are very nice and compassionate, They were energetic, enthusiastic and more friendly. Kindly, I am thanking you and your

staffs

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staff

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for providing us

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excellent

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with execellent

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execellent

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excellent

services.

Thanking

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you, Yours Sincerely, name

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

195 words

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You and some friends ate a meal at restaurant to celebrate a special occasion , and you very pleased with the food and services . Write a letter to the restaurant manager .

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Most societies are based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they wanted, society could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Every day traffic seems to get worse on our roads. How can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers?