An English-speaking friend is coming to study in your town next year and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Offer to find a place for him / her to live • Give advice about how to find a part-time job • Give information on where he / she can learn your language

#friend #study #town #year #information #advice #offer #place #job #language

Dear John,warm wishes I am good here and I hope you and your family are all well.I am glad to see you in my town,

moreover

,I will come to receive you at the airport.Don't worry about your living place I will arrange one studio room near your college. You do not need to worry about the part-time job as well I know you are a native English speaker one vacation is available in my office for you,

furthermore

,we can work together in the same place.As I told you before my colleagues are very familiar.we all work as good friends,when you come and start a job you feel easy. In my ,town there are many beautiful places to visit when you come here I have planned to many things doing with.At ,

last

as I know you can face some communication problems ,in the beginning,

however

, don't worry about it I will arrange a language class for you near your apartment.

Finally

,I am very happy to see you soon. your best Gobinda Mudvhari

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

168 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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