Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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people
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history
is
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important
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subjects
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others believe that
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present day
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subjects
like
Science
and
Technology
are more
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appropriate
apropriate
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appropriate
than
history
. I firmly support the statement that
history
is the one fundamental and basic
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school
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shool
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subjects
all
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time. Both sides will be discussed in
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and modern
technology
changed everything, and I suppose that some
people
think that
Science
and
Technology
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important nowadays.
First
of all, modern life changing sharply and
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conditions demand from modern
people
many skills to use computers and modern fools.
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it
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demand
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from
people
many acknowledge
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Science
and
Technology
.
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,
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generation
interested
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in
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more than
History
.
For example
, recent Boston research shows that many Universities
upgradet
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upgraded
upgrades
their
strategy
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direction to
Science
and
Technology
. It is fact,
that is
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trend.
On the other hand
, some
people
think that
History
is the basic school
subjects
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subject
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. In my opinion,
this
statement that
History
is one of the fundamental
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school
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shool
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school
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subject
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is
right
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direction. In fact,
that
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nowadays
to learn
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history
among
the
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students
particularly
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new
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generation is not popular. Perhaps it is
some
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boring and not attractive.
For example
, on the
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contrary
contary
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recent London educational research demonstrate that
history
subject became more popular. There are a lot of examples, that many founder
technology
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and many investment
company
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companies
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explain
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their
that
the
thei
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their
success it
gratiful
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grateful
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acknowledge
knowledge
aknowledge
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knowledge
from
history
. In conclusion, it can hardly be denied, that
history
subject is
the
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one of the
important
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most important
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.
Moreover
, I would say, that many other
subjects
should
based
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on
history
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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