The best way for the government to solve traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. Do you agree or disagree?

Traffic
congestion is one important problem that many counties face.
However
, whether the
government
should provide free
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pubic
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traffic
transportation all the
days
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is a controversial issue. In my opinion, I disagree with that mind. With economic
developed
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, more and more cities have
traffic
congestion
problem
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. In
particularly
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, lots of
people
need to spend
long
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time
on their
way
to work
everyday
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. The simple reason is that
people
who
living
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in
this
competitive world support
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very hard. To resolve
this
issue, some
people
believe that the
government
should provide
free
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public
traffic
system every single day. Meanwhile, free
traffic
can definitely promote some
people
to change their lifestyle,
such
as by bus
instead
of driving their own car to work. We cannot ignore they will cost more
time
on their
way
. So driving
own
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car is
more
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convenient
convinent
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convenient
way
if they want to save
time
.
On the other hand
, if the
government
spend more money on
public
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traffic
system, they have to reduce
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in
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,
for example
, education and medication are
also
very important things for the
government
.
In addition
, if
the
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public
traffic
transport is not free,
people
will make a good decision to choose whether they need to change their
traffic
method
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on their
times
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. At the same
time
,
people
can
also
think about how to save fuel
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on their
way
.
Therefore
, the
government
could improve the infrastructure
such
as
expand
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high-
way
or
increase
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job opportunities
at
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urban
area
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instead
providing
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free public
traffic
transport. In conclusion, the
government
should spend money on suitable
place
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, since all the
taxpayer
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taxpayers
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need
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all kinds of
societies
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services.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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