You are planning a trip for you and a group of friends to a resort in a foreinn country. Write a letter to the manager of the resort requesting more information. Your letter should include When you hope to be staying at the resort Ask for suggestions on activities to do Ask for advice on places to eat for both vegetarian and family friendly places
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to request some suggestions from you about our trip to your village.
I am making a plan to travel to Gold Mountain next
month, from the 2nd to the 15th. There are 10 people, including two children, in our group. However
, we have never been to your country before. Therefore
, could you please tell me how the weather is during that time as normal and give me some information on what we should take?
I researched online that next
month some new activities will be opened in Gold Mountain Park. We are very interested in and want to attend it, but we don’t know which one we need to book online, so could you give me more details?
In addition
, we are all vegetarians, and I reserved one villa with five rooms for our group. We want to cook by ourselves since we are working in a restaurant. The booking details did not show whether we could cook in the house, so could you confirm that we could cook in the house instead
of eating outside and show me someplace that we can buy some food materials near the house?
I am hoping to receive your reply with your suggestions about this
trip. If you have any questions, please let me know. Thank you so much.
Yours faithfully,Submitted by kevin. B
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite