Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an satisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

In recent years, many people believe that accepting a negative situation is beneficial,
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others argue that improving themselves might
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to
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better ways. In the following paragraph, both of
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will be discussed in detail. People, nowadays, have to face various
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bad situations and move on.
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them lose their confidence. How should they deal
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? Many of them are forced to accept these affairs because they are unsure how to
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. It can help them get through
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awful circumstance even though nothing will be better.
On the other hand
, others advised them to correct their mistakes rather than accepting their faults and doing nothing. If they know how to fix themself as fast as they know, everything certainly going to be better.
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from math test but you still doing nothing
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of trying to do more about math problems, your score won't be better.
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I can see the point
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a bad situation, but if you do not know anything to improve
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I firmly agree that trying to improve yourself in a bad situation is the best way to brings you to better target.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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