You are planning a trip for you and a group of friends to a resort in a foreinn country. Write a letter to the manager of the resort requesting more information. Your letter should include When you hope to be staying at the resort Ask for suggestions on activities to do Ask for advice on places to eat for both vegetarian and family friendly places

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Dear Manager, I am Tulasi from India. And three of my friends along with me planning a vacation to Dubai for a week starting from 15 th of October to the 21st of October. We are trying to explore various options for our stay during the above said period. We came across your resort and are really excited to see the ratings and feedback from your esteemed customer. We need accommodation for five families with a nice beach view and arranged with good facilities like Entertaining the nights with fun games and meeting different kinds of people to know about the culture, and

also

looking for free wifi for browsing and to share updates to our friends about the trip.

In addition

to, that we have been searching for family-friendly restaurants, cafes and juice bars with varieties of food options as we are vegetarians and prefer only vegetarian food. I appreciate it if you could respond with all the details of my questions and any offers you could facilitate for us. Expecting your email at the earliest to plan for travel in a structured way. Please stay connected to the mentioned number +14164565673 for

further

questions. Thanks, Yours sincerely, Tulasi

Submitted by nrama.test on Mon Oct 10 2022

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