The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
Two
maps are illustrating the development of the City hospital in 2007 and 2010.
They are three differences between the two
years they are adding two
roundabouts at two
ends of the hospital road
, making a new public car park and building a bus
station .
In two
intersections of the hospital road
with the ring road
in the north and city road
in the ,south there are building two
roundabouts in 2010 .Also
, there is a public car park in the east of the city hospital near the ring road
the entrance of it being from the ring road
. staff car park being separate for staff and its entrance is from the ring road
.
In 2010 , Instead
of the bus
,stop we have a bus
station west of the hospital road
and it have access to two
roundabouts at the ends of the hospital road
.so that is
the cause for removing bus
stops.Submitted by Fa Ha on
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