The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
Two
maps are illustrating the development of the City hospital in 2007 and 2010. They are three differences between the
two
years they are adding
two
roundabouts at
two
ends of the hospital
road
, making a new public car park and building a
bus
station . In
two
intersections of the hospital
road
with the ring
road
in the north and city
road
in the ,south there are building
two
roundabouts in 2010 .
Also
, there is a public car park in the east of the city hospital near the ring
road
the entrance of it being from the ring
road
. staff car park being separate for staff and its entrance is from the ring
road
. In 2010 ,
Instead
of the
bus
,stop we have a
bus
station west of the hospital
road
and it have access to
two
roundabouts at the ends of the hospital
road
.so
that is
the cause for removing
bus
stops.
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