Should wealthy nations required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and educations? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

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resources should come forward to help the ones in need.

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you cannot ignore the consequences it can bring. So, in

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rich or poor they are still human. We cannot think of, look at, or hear of

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people in need without sympathy and compassion.

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the recent deadly flood in Pakistan got the attention of the whole world and they came forward to show their solidary with the ones grieving.

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, developed nations are growing extremely fast and the

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are still in the same phase so the distribution of wealth is uneven. So sharing wealth can be a useful way to prevent people from bad future.

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in economics “mixing the apple juice with the lime” by giving them financial ads those nations would not try to develop themselves and continue to rely on the foreign incoming,

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, by helping the poor countries the developed can dominate them and can interfere in their governance matters and will try to influence their political decisions

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every time IMF gives loan to any under-developed country it is always based on their particular conditions. I will conclude

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wealth have both

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bad and good side so we should try to practice the better side and avoid the dark side.