You live near a park. Recently. some students from a local college have been spending time in the park in the evenings and at the night. They talk loudly and play noisy games and listen to loud music.

Dear
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, I am writing
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email to complain about the noise from the
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. I live at 335 Rathburn. My home is across the street from the entrance to Zomoto
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,
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is just beside Newtown college. After college, students hang out in the
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from approximately 6 PM to late at night. They do
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most days, especially on weekends. Another thing is, the students talk and play loud music, and sometimes they even play soccer or other sports and games.
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has a big impact on my life because the noise makes it hard for me and my family to sleep. In order to resolve
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issue, I would like you to put the sign boards at the
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making people
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quiet if they use the
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in the evening or at night. Alternatively, you lock the
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after 8pm so that nobody can hang out there after dark and disturb others by being noisy. I am sure that other people living on my street would feel happier if you adopt any one of these suggestions. Thank you Best Regards, Tulasi

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