You live near a park. Recently. some students from a local college have been spending time in the park in the evenings and at the night. They talk loudly and play noisy games and listen to loud music.

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. I live at 335 Rathburn. My home is across the street from the entrance to Zomoto

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is just beside Newtown college. After college, students hang out in the

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from approximately 6 PM to late at night. They do

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most days, especially on weekends. Another thing is, the students talk and play loud music, and sometimes they even play soccer or other sports and games.

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has a big impact on my life because the noise makes it hard for me and my family to sleep. In order to resolve

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issue, I would like you to put the sign boards at the

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quiet if they use the

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in the evening or at night. Alternatively, you lock the

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after 8pm so that nobody can hang out there after dark and disturb others by being noisy. I am sure that other people living on my street would feel happier if you adopt any one of these suggestions. Thank you Best Regards, Tulasi

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Oct 12, 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 4.5

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You live near a park. Recently. some students from a local college have been spending time in the park in the evenings and at the night. They talk loudly and play noisy games and listen to loud music.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Problems and solution of sharing information on the internet.

The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited describe where you stayed and what you can do there give one negative aspect about the destination (204)

Some people say that in the modern world, getting old is entirely bad. Others, however, say that life for the elderly nowadays is much better than it was in the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.