You work from home and the equipement you use for your job is faulty. Write a letter to the company. * explianing the problem. * how it has affected your work. * what you want them to do.

Dear James I'm writing

this

email about the faulty keys in my keyboard that are hindering me to perform my work effectively. I have received a new laptop as my old one was out of warranty date and the key

such

as alt, ctrl and couple of alphabets keys are not functioning properly. Due to the faulty keyboard, I'm struggling to perform and complete the tasks assigned to me. As a short-term measure, I'm using an external keyboard to overcome

this

issue and I would like you to let me know if I can service at my nearest service centre or if there is any other possible way to resolve

this

issue please let me know.

Submitted by p.john.ebenezer on Wed Oct 12 2022

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The Closing

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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

116 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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