Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true to say that some
people
believe it is the most
intellect
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to accept a bad
situation
, namely
for
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an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. While I accept that
this
may suit many
people
, I believe that it is better to try and improve
such
situations. On the one hand, it is fine to accept a bad
situation
in a
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life, human beings always make mistakes in most
of
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the new
situation
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situations
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. Maybe it is hard at
first
at the beginning of circumference to accept it, but it seems to get to terms with the reality
such
as unsatisfactory
job
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jobs
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and shortage of money for
a
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numerous ordinary
people
.
On the other hand
, it is better to try without thinking
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consequences after
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any
problems
. In fact, it will be extremely difficult to start the
first
step
as
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writing an essay to even starting a
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business
bussiness
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business
,
however
,
experience
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was gained and ideas were learned during
this
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these
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tough times.
Furthermore
, failures were the important lessons that every
people
would
met
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in working and studying.
As a result
, we tend to improve whenever we had solved every trouble, these experience would make us stronger and deal better with each
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when
a
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similar
problems
come to us again. As far as some
people
are concerned that the best way of solving
problems
at
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a bad
situation
was accepting it,
by contrast
in my own opinion, the best way to
exhance
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enhance
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ourselves is to accept our own
situation
but at the same time try to solve the
problems
that really ignore us and always learn and improve.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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