Many jobs require ongoing training and research to stay competitive in a world with rapidly evolving information and technology. Some believe that it is the responsibility of businesses to pay for this training for their staff while others feel it is up to the individual. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It has been argued that in some companies it is a necessity for the folk to be trained continuously. Some

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training is upon individuals, while others think a specific

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must educate them and pay for it. I believe the crowd must be trained well-set

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their jobs, and it is up to the

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which they work for. It is often assumed that

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everyone demands to be up-to-date with

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advanced knowledge to get an appropriate

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it is important to have enough erudition in many sections,

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technology. Along

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, plenty of corporations tend to train

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employees to make them qualified for

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, it will be a great help to improve their personal skills and confidence as well as being able to do their

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accurately.  

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, others believe individuals are responsible for developing their own skills and knowledge, and they should be able to suit in many jobs and many companies that they are going to

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in my opinion, without

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everyone should try to advance their abilities, but it is the responsibility of the

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to educate them proportionate with the

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which they are going to do so they will be able to do their

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in a really appropriate way. In conclusion, I would argue that every

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is responsible to train employees

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better skills and work and the

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of the

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for training employees is outweighed the disadvantages of it.