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Nowadays more people move away from their friend and families for work do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage

#people #move #friend #families #work #advantage
In recent days, most
of
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the
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people
move
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have moved
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 away to foreign
nation
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nations
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 from their relatives, close
friend
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friends
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 and families
for finding
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to find
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 cash. Especially, grown-ups and
juvenily
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juveniles
.There are pros and cons. In
this
 essay, I will start to explain
this
 topic. Some of
reasons
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the reasons
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 why they
move
 away to another country. To commence with, there are a lot of
reason
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reasons
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, what I mean In our society.
people
 have various
typs
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types
 of chances for
studing
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studying
.
However
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 they do not use it.
Fisrt
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First
 of all,
people
 who
move
 their family and hometown. A good illustration of
this
,
take
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 Uzbekistan and other places
people
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, people
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. They
move
 away to
another countries
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another country
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 every time.
As a
result
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result,
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 they do not see and
living
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 together. It is true that
,
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may be
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maybe
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 it is very hard without living
guaridions
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guardians
 and offspring. By
constrast
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contrast
, they
complusory
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compulsory
 do
this
 work. On the other side,
three
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there
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 are some
advantage
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advantages
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 sides. Many
people
 who
is
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are
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 leaving to abroad state.
Firstly
 they learn
their
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 cultures and
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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. Another issue is that it can be very difficult to
bein
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begin
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 a new life from
far
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a far
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 hometown.
However
 other hand you can
amke
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make
 a friend .
Basicly
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Basically
people
 learn a new language.
To sum up
, starting life in a foreign country is never easy. both os sides pros and cons.
However
, it is positive than negative sides
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