Many countries have compulsory military service for men after they leave school. It would be a good idea to adopt this system, for men and possibly women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Military around the globe has set standards and it is mandatory to have a required height and a proper eye-sight to get selected. Many nations have forcefully started to recruit students who have finished school. And I disagree with

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with, young adults when they complete their schooling they either plan to study

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or take up a job If they are forced to join the armed services it can hamper their idea of being free.

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some students might not be eligible to join in the

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place but if they are forced to join they might not compete well enough.

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6ft in height can climb easily on a wall using rope, whereas a short guy with normal height can't climb as quickly as others.

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can demotivate them and other adults might bully them for their inefficiency.

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will not only demotivate them to progress

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can impact their mental balance. To continue

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, even if the above statements are true enrolling fresh graduates in the military can help to teach the important values of like discipline and respecting seniors but at the cost of their dreams. To exemplify,

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a student is a good dancer during his childhood

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to pursue a career in dancing will have to join the military and sacrifice his dream of becoming a better dancer.

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, it is important for governments to actively participate in

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discussion and take mindful decisions.

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, in my opinion, it would be wise to say that governments should open a military school in which students are taught about the country's safety from their childhood so that they have the same mentality while growing up and commit to said command willfully.