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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvanteges of being self-employed?

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During the
last
 decades, the forms of working have totally changed, in the past, the most important factor was the physical ability of a person in doing jobs, but nowadays most jobs can be done lonely and because of that many
people
 prefer to
work
 on their own rather than being employed in a company or an organization. There are some disadvantages
in
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 self-employed chores which will be mentioned in
this
 approach of writing, and it might be the case that should be revised. At
first
, a number of prospects always cause dissatisfaction among employees of a company or an office which
lead
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 to
people
 choosing to
work
 on their own. The major item is the low payment in return
to
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 the high volume of chores expected to be done by a worker. Another thing is the working hours of organizations and corporates that encroach on almost all the time of their staff in a day and workers usually do not have enough spare time to spend with their families or do their personal things. These kinds of reasons in restricted factories and institutes usually make workers
to
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be bored and lose their
efficiency
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 of jobs over a period of time.
On the other hand
, there are some disadvantages
for
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to
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 being
sell-executive
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,
for instance
, the morality of being competitive with other colleagues would be lost when there is no rivalry
to
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 other employees, and it may
has
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 an adverse effect in struggling to develop new skilled workers.
Moreover
, when a person works alone, his/her abilities and knowledge will not be
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transferred
transfered
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transferred
 or better to say, taught to others, and
as a result
,
less
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 expert clients would be prepared to
work
 in the same field in future, while by teamwork science and education would be developed more through all the staff of a company or organization. To sum up,
although
 there are some wise reasons why some
people
 try to
work
 on their own, the disadvantages of being self-employed may oblige
people
 who should care to provide a more convenient working environment in corporations and departments to headhunt expert employers to
work
 for them, in order to grow their working qualities more.
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