Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvanteges of being self-employed?

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During the
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decades, the forms of working have totally changed, in the past, the most important factor was the physical ability of a person in doing jobs, but nowadays most jobs can be done lonely and because of that many
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prefer to
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on their own rather than being employed in a company or an organization. There are some disadvantages
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self-employed chores which will be mentioned in
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approach of writing, and it might be the case that should be revised. At
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, a number of prospects always cause dissatisfaction among employees of a company or an office which
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to
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choosing to
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on their own. The major item is the low payment in return
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the high volume of chores expected to be done by a worker. Another thing is the working hours of organizations and corporates that encroach on almost all the time of their staff in a day and workers usually do not have enough spare time to spend with their families or do their personal things. These kinds of reasons in restricted factories and institutes usually make workers
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be bored and lose their
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of jobs over a period of time.
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, there are some disadvantages
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being
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,
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, the morality of being competitive with other colleagues would be lost when there is no rivalry
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other employees, and it may
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an adverse effect in struggling to develop new skilled workers.
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, when a person works alone, his/her abilities and knowledge will not be
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transferred
transfered
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transferred
or better to say, taught to others, and
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,
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expert clients would be prepared to
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in the same field in future, while by teamwork science and education would be developed more through all the staff of a company or organization. To sum up,
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there are some wise reasons why some
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try to
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on their own, the disadvantages of being self-employed may oblige
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who should care to provide a more convenient working environment in corporations and departments to headhunt expert employers to
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for them, in order to grow their working qualities more.
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