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some people belive that it is best to except a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. discuss both views and give your own oppinion.

#people #belive #situation #job #shortage #money #oppinion
Although
 some consider that it is better to accept a
situation
 which is bad
such
 as an unsuitable
job
 while
the
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others think that it is important to improve the
situation
.I believe that it is more important to improve the
situation
 rather than
going
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 with the flow. On the one hand,some
people
except
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accept
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 the
situation
 whether they are not happy with the
job
 or the shortage of money because there could be no other options.
In other words
,
people
 need to provide for
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their
thier
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their
 families even if the
situation
 is not in their favour.
For example
,during the covid 19 pandemic,
people
 had to struggle and look for even a
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part time
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 or any
types
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 of
job
 to cater for their families.
Moreover
,they were paid less compared to their normal jobs but
still
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 they had to accept that
situation
 and
work
 since
their
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 was no alternative option.
In addition
 ,some families are huge,and most of the members are children so eventually the parents have to
work
 to feed their children even if the pay is not that much.
On the other hand
, some try to
to
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improve the
situation
 by doing extra shifts or a totally new
job
.
For instance
,pulling extra hours in the evening apart from the normal hours or
by
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covering a workmate's shift or
by
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doing
a
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 entirely new
exrtra
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extra
 few hours of
work
 for a different organization.In
this
way
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 they get to overcome the shortage of cash.
Finally
,most
of
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people
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 who have a large family and the members are eligible to
work
,so all
work
 and contribute to the family so by applying
such
 strategies the problem of shortage of cash is minimised. In conclusion,it is a difficult task to accept a bad
situation
 when there is
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an
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option but it is more important to
work
 hard and thrive for the best
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