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Some people think that the Olympic Games is an exciting event and can bring nations together. Others, however, think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #olympic #games #event #nations #waste #money
Few
people
 believe that the Olympics Game is an important event and
also
 make Unity in the nation.
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, Some of them
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 that it just throw of
money
 into the trash.In my
opinion
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 completely
agree
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 with
this
 statement that it is
a
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 only thing which
create
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creates
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 a strong bond in
country
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the country
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. In
this
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ought
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discuss
dicuss
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discuss
 both
the
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side and give your personal point of view.
to begin
 with, there are
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several
sereral
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several
thing
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of
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 agree with
this
 statement.
Firstly
,
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in
world
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the world
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 cup can make
people
 together in the sense of
family
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families
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 spend much of the time together while watching
that
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 world cup.
In other words
, Some believe that many games in their
people
 love to watch so that simple they can sit together and watch that games.
For instance
, Whenever Pakistan matching is coming live on television so
whole
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 world put
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the screen
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screen
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 in
different
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a different
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area
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areas
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 and together and discuss
about
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the factor and figures.
Moreover
, I would like to highlight one more reason
of
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importance
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the importance
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 of having
this
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events
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event
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.
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plan
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plans
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 together to watch
that events
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that event
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 so
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that's
that
thats
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 just a reason
of
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 meeting as well.
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, My family call all the relative at our house to watch
match
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to
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together.
On the other hand
, some
people
 argue that it is just
waste
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a waste
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 of
money
. due to the
inflation
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 they
also
 give that
money
 to the poor and needy
people
 as well.
In other words
,
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 of
government
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the government
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 to put that much on just a simple game. To illustrate, In
Pakistan
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 all
people
 are
affective
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of
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 floods so it isn't necessary to take part in
Olympic
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the Olympic
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 games because they can
also
 give that
money
 to the
floods
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 victims.
Furthermore
, I would like to outline one more point that
people
 argue most
of
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about that. Wasting
of
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money
into
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on
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the
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such
 as
game
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games
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 they
also
 put that
money
 into the Education department for
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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.
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, In
india
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India
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 75 %
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children
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of childrens
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childrens
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children
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 can't take
proper
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a proper
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 education system. To sum up, the vast majority of
people
 believe that gaming events are important for
country
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the country
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 to create
a
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better bonding. due to
people
spend
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spending
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 most
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of the
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the
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their
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 time with families and
also
 relative to
their
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there
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 and put
screen
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screens
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 everywhere.
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