You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter: Say what the participants liked about the hotel Explain why they were unhappy about the food Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Mr Smith,
My name is
steev
,I like to complain about the Correct your spelling
steve
food
service that you have served in our annual meeting held last
week.
Firstly
,the guests were amazed by the interior and ambience of your hotel,Also
the natural painting in the lounge with the sense of reality,Moreover
,they were satisfied with the hospitality by you
staff members.To add Correct pronoun usage
your
further
,the valet parking is organised without any flaws and the participants were happy about it.
However
, the food
arrangement was clumsy and the customers provided their negative opinion about the taste of the food
.The south Indian butter chicken dish is salty and extremely spicy.Also
,the barbequed lamb is overcooked and doesn't fit the main course.
Since,
your restaurant Remove the comma
apply
restaurant
is well reputed in our area,I request you to do a routine check on the Remove the redundancy
apply
food
items with the experienced chefs before serving them to the customers.Hence
this
will increase customer satisfaction also
your reputation.I firmly believe you will act upon it going forward.
Yours faithfully,
SteevSubmitted by stevejegan on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite