You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:  Say what the participants liked about the hotel  Explain why they were unhappy about the food  Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

Dear Mr Smith, My name is

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steve

,I like to complain about the

food

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service that you have served in our annual meeting held

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week.

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,the guests were amazed by the interior and ambience of your hotel,

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the natural painting in the lounge with the sense of reality,

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,they were satisfied with the hospitality by

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staff members.To add

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,the valet parking is organised without any flaws and the participants were happy about it.

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, the

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arrangement was clumsy and the customers provided their negative opinion about the taste of the

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.The south Indian butter chicken dish is salty and extremely spicy.

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,the barbequed lamb is overcooked and doesn't fit the main course. Since

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your restaurant

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is well reputed in our area,I request you to do a routine check on the

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items with the experienced chefs before serving them to the customers.

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will increase customer satisfaction

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your reputation.I firmly believe you will act upon it going forward. Yours faithfully, Steev