You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say : 1. What is the reason for your leaving 2. What do you plan to do 3. Where an when will you meet your friend to discuss it?

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of people and industries which made silk in England and Wales during the
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50 years before the 20th century. Overall, it's clearly evident that the
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of employees, not only female but
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when 91412 people were producing tulle in 693 factories,
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down to what it concerns about human labour, whilst the
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of manufacturing declined modestly from 702 to 663. In 1901, the global labours offered in fabric confection reached the lowest amount, despite showing the same tendency between men and women, which illustrated 13375 and 25567 each respectively. While these industries
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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