Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It can not be denied that population growth is a major issue in

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metropolitan area. The extension of the citizens is contrary to the broadening of the residential area that has limited land to build and it will lead to a housing crisis phenomenon and

council

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should be concerned about

this

problem

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essay.

First

of all, the authority should create a comprehensible regulation with respect to public migration. The escalation of inhabitants in the capital

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by people from urban

areas

moving to the city. These urbanization purposes have a different background that mainly comes with trying to get a decent job.The regime should be aware of

this

issue and create strict rules to decrease the trend or alternatively create a lot of established employment activity in urban

areas

.

Secondly

, a dense population will increase the scarcity of living in houses or apartments. As

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society expands while the land still remains, it will bring on the lack of residential

areas

. The living costs are intended to be expensive whereas the salary is still constant and is not the best possible situation. Following that previous reason, it will affect the index of happiness rate (causing stress, depression, and anxiety) since people tend to secure a job and do the hard work to pay the rent.

In addition

, if the occupant rate reaches a certain peak point there will be a mess and chaos happens

such

as an extreme shortage situation and unemployment.

Although

another assumption said that it can be helped by

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to give subvention for accommodation, it is not feasible to only rely on that solution and it will not overcome the

problem

at all.

However

, it only fits as a temporary explanation. To conclude, the shortage of housing

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is a major

problem

in populated cities, and authorities should have serious regulations regarding

this

problem

to create a better place to live.