SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT UNIVERSITIES SHOULD PROVIDE GRADUATES WITH THE KNOWLEDGE AND SKILLS NEEDED IN THE WORK PLACE.OTHERS THINK THAT THE TRUE FUNCTION OF A UNIVERSITY SHOULD BE TO GIVE ACCESS TO KNOWLEDGE FOR ITS OWN SAKE REGARDLESS WEATHER THE COURSE IS USEFUL TO AN EMPLOYER

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higher

education

institutes should aim to produce graduates who fulfil adequate

skills

and

knowledge

for the

job

market

, while others hold the opinion that,

university

education

should target

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give

knowledge

for their own benefit. I agree with the statement of universities should aim

job

market

when producing

students

.During my essay, I will try to justify my ideas for the above statement.

To begin

with, after nearly thirteen years of school

education

and passing out a number of difficult exams,

students

will choose their future pathway by entering

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a

university

for higher

education

either in the government or private sector.

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they will follow individual courses mastering the necessary

knowledge

and

skills

,particularly aiming

job

market

.Finding a good carrier would be the ultimate target of most of them knowing the fact that, you spend a significant time of your life and money, staying away from loving families and the government

also

allocate a significant amount of money to universities.If the ultimate product of the higher

education

institutions struggles to find a

job

, it would be a whole waste of all the above resources and there should be enough opportunities to find out a carrier local as well as globally. Not only the student but

also

the government would be unhappy and unsatisfied if the above

job

criteria are not fulfilled.

For example

, a medical student studies in a

university

for nearly five years to master

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knowledge

and

skills

aiming to become a doctor and he or she should be able to practice them once pass out of medical college locally or abroad. On the other ,hand some

students

can gain

knowledge

and

skills

for their own benefit.For ,example if one can master music at

university

and can use it for own benefit after passing out without competing in the

job

market

. In ,

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I strongly believe that

university

education

should target to deliver

students

with compulsory

knowledge

and

skills

aiming the

job

market

.