SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT UNIVERSITIES SHOULD PROVIDE GRADUATES WITH THE KNOWLEDGE AND SKILLS NEEDED IN THE WORK PLACE.OTHERS THINK THAT THE TRUE FUNCTION OF A UNIVERSITY SHOULD BE TO GIVE ACCESS TO KNOWLEDGE FOR ITS OWN SAKE REGARDLESS WEATHER THE COURSE IS USEFUL TO AN EMPLOYER

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institutes should aim to produce graduates who fulfil adequate

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, while others hold the opinion that,

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for their own benefit. I agree with the statement of universities should aim

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when producing

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with, after nearly thirteen years of school

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and passing out a number of difficult exams,

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will choose their future pathway by entering

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either in the government or private sector.

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they will follow individual courses mastering the necessary

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.Finding a good carrier would be the ultimate target of most of them knowing the fact that, you spend a significant time of your life and money, staying away from loving families and the government

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allocate a significant amount of money to universities.If the ultimate product of the higher

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institutions struggles to find a

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, it would be a whole waste of all the above resources and there should be enough opportunities to find out a carrier local as well as globally. Not only the student but

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the government would be unhappy and unsatisfied if the above

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criteria are not fulfilled.

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, a medical student studies in a

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for nearly five years to master

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aiming to become a doctor and he or she should be able to practice them once pass out of medical college locally or abroad. On the other ,hand some

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can gain

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for their own benefit.For ,example if one can master music at

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and can use it for own benefit after passing out without competing in the

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I strongly believe that

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should target to deliver

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with compulsory

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aiming the

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