Some people prefer the lifestyle and activities offered when living in a cold environment. Others prefer a hot environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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it is widely discussed

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that a plethora of individuals

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in the freezing surrounder which provides hustle and bustle.While others opt

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boiling atmosphere.In my

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each individual has a preference for a particular climate and temperature depending on location, circumstances and body adaption. Both sides of

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situation are elaborated on in the ensuing paragraphs. On the one hand ,one of the ideal times for new fruit and vegetable growth is throughout the winter.

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,healthy, lush green vegetables like broccoli, cauliflower,and carrots are now more affordable and accessible to the poor

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lowers the likelihood that a country will experience starvation.To illustrate, In my country, Uzbekistan, there are many farmers, and they water their crops more in winter and plant more crops.What's more,as compared to the selling price during other seasons, the price is about 78% less.

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, those people who cannot afford expensive food can enjoy fresh vegetables

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,while social transfers air conditioning and undergo

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hyperhidrosis during the summer,

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time of year has the healthiest emotional climate.

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humans do not have to stay inside

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direct sunlight

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they can workout out somewhere and have a family picnic on a tropical island.For increase, In cities where

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is heated, adolescents can enjoy the rays of the sun, which will give them Vitamin D,

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, they will be healthy when they grow up.As an indication, scientists have discovered that a person can be more productive the higher the temperature goes those who live in Hawaii live longer than those who do so in a frosty climate. In conclusion, a bright sunny day brings

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best psychological sides of humans,while mist yields nutritious food and

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atmosphere

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chilly.