You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have an acquaintance that lives there. Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter • explain your situation • say why you feel unsure about living in the city • ask some questions about life in the cit

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Dear Ms Jina, I am writing

this

letter to express my happiness and glad to inform you that I received a job opportunity at Daily Bank, Mumbai and moving to your

city

month. I received an offer letter from the bank yesterday evening and I should join the organization on 10th October, because they have scheduled an induction program from 12th Oct onwards. Due to

this

limited span of time I have concerns about arranging accommodation and adjusting to the new

city

. Since childhood, I heard that all the time there is a crowd catching the train and because it is a metro

city

so daily traffic jam has to face while commuting to the office. I was born and brought up in a small town so, have concerned if I can adjust to

city

life or not. Sometimes I don't feel that I can catch up with Mumbai's folks' speed ,it's not a cup of my tea. I know you are living there for a long time, so you must be aware of each nuke and corner of the

city

. Can you provide me with information about accommodation? I prefer to rent an apartment within walking distance from my office. How do you spend your weekend? I would be grateful if you provide some light on

this

, that will take some pressure off my shoulder. Thank you and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Nikita.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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8 paragraphs

240 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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