Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Whether doing the same thing is best or
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is best sparked a lot of
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these days. While some people believe that
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doing the same thing is good for their family security, I agree with those who believe that
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of
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pays more and broadens their thinking. On the one hand, supporters of
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processing a steady life is more likely to have positive aspects.
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with, doing the same thing makes a person expert in that
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they no need to attend special training frequently to update new things periodically.
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, performing the same task daily is easy to follow. after a certain time which becomes your routine
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, I side with those who believe that taking
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risk is the
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progress.
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, people usually miss chances when they do not take risks in life.
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,
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or profession broadens the mind and thinking of any individual. and
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it increases the creativity of the individual. In conclusion,
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makes any individual an expert in that field, I believe that those who
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their field
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their mind.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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