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Band 5.5

Some people are happy to stay in the same area for their whole life, while others prefer living in many different places.

Some
people
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 prefer to live in only
one
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 area and stay blissfully happy, while other
people
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 like regularly changing their homes. Overall, as we know there are two types of
people
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, who prefer to live and grow in
one
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 space and others like moving and exchanging living places. In my own opinion, It is good to grow only in
one
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place
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, because there are lots of memories, but if someone moves every time, so they are more amiable with new
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. It is clear that a big number of
people
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 prefer to live in
one
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place
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.
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 in Uzbekistan citizens want to
choose
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 live in
one
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 space, because everyone will remind, become bored and love the
place
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 where they lived all time.
One
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 word is "memory" of a favourite
place
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. A large number of
people
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 would like to move and move to new places to live.
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 in Russia, the USA and in Europe communities like to do so. There are two reasons.
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, the same
people
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 develop and become adopted to everything faster than
people
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 who like living in
one
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 space. It is good, because ,in some accidents or emergencies, everyone can adapt to everything without some "surprises" with
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 or climate. The
second
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 reason is as I mentioned relationships among
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. Recent statistics demonstrated that "regularly moving
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" are more amiable and mercifully with new
neighbours
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. It means that changing placements is more positive than sitting in four types of wool. Eventually,
people
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 who prefer to live in
one
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place
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, are more memorable, while regular moving is
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